Regina saw the village from
atop. The first doubt that struck her mind was does it belong to the earth or
perchance broken from the moon or some celestial body .She was stricken by romantic, spiritual, and mundane thought. If I were a bird I would
fly into the village, she thought instantly. Soon she remembered the long journey it
took to reach the village. She felt that it was a journey into herself. She felt that the body is merely a wall hiding the soul. Her body dissolved in her soul. The she remembered the poem "I wish I was still drinking when nothing is too clear" by Colin Hay. She felt that her heart is a
double voiced bird. Her inner voice sang gleefully later playfully ventriloquized " It is a world a away from the world" She shouted "WUNDERBAR!!! and took a snap with her NIKON P 1000. "Can you capture the village from here?" said Satya. She wanted to say that her camera has 125x Zoom but she put it differently " No this Village can not be captured by camera, it can be best captured by a lyrical poem.
The Village from atop appears like a miniature
model. Most houses have slant roofs. They are either thatched or tiled roofing.
All houses are small and similar. A rivulet flows alongside the village. Lucky
people live in the village , she said. seeing that Regina was enamored with the
village said "Madam if you stay in the village at night it offers you a
gift too. said Giri. Regina raised her brows in a questioning manner."
This village promises a clear sky at night and gifts you the stars." They
moved towards the jeep.
This picture is as it is,where you have exactly said in the scene. The houses were near. And in villages there will be no apartments. No height buildings. The street are narrow.
ReplyDeleteBy reading your blogs, I am getting new ideas. About how to start a scene. How to explain the beauty.
I would amazed if I was in her place due to the nature's beauty. Really a fantastic scene to imagine
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumanth, I wish that you too created wonderful scenes.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumanth, I wish that you too created wonderful scenes.
ReplyDeleteDear blogger after reading this scene, I went to a new world
ReplyDeletedear Sahitya Priya there are two worlds. one inside, the other one out side. Language enriches both worlds. Thank you.
DeleteGreat write Born. I must say, you are a great writer and enjoy very much your pieces …this is raw and gets the massage across. Sir
DeleteSelection of ANVESHANA is a good thing sir
ReplyDeleteAnd your prowess enriches anything
It so nice story lines are very interesting rezina eager to the village and forest scrept show the imagen the forest, birds sounds and villages beaut, razina, satya and Giri there good communication.
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